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Poem Title Today, Only Today

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Comment User timothy hollins
Date 25-Jun-2007
Comments You poured it out with this piece! I feel loved and alone, don't know why, but that's how I feel after reading this. It's so revealing, and I think that's what draw me to your pieces. You make the reader feels as if he/she knows you

NO 2
Comment User Felecia
Date 27-Jun-2007
Comments I felt this...  It's hard being single at times, the lonliness creeps up on you in the dark, and leaves you helpless, sometimes being held for just one day would mean so much, but to have it last a life time is a dream

NO 3
Comment User writeouspoet
Date 30-Jun-2007
Comments Wow!  This piece is so personalized and heartfelt... I can relate, loneliness is a tough trial to deal with.  However, my approach is seeing the light at the end of tunnel; it won't always be like this, I BELIEVE!  Thanks for sharing this write.  Profound...

NO 4
Comment User Felecia
Date 23-Aug-2007
Comments I can relate this very well Lady Flava, I wonder will I have someone to curl up in one day too, and let all my inibitions fly.

NO 5
Comment User thugchildprodigy
Date 23-Apr-2008
Comments

AS I READ THIS I CUDNT HELP BUT THINK OF THAT CERTAIN SOMEONE THAT I MYSELF WUDNT MIND HOLDING DOWN YA KNO...THIS MAY SOUND STRANGE BUT ITS A BIT COMFORTING KNOWING IM NOT ALONE IN THESE FEELINGS OF WANT AND THE NEED TO B LOVED....TODAY I MAY B ALONE..BUT TOMORROW...WELL TOMORROWS ANOTHA DAY INDEED!

NO 6
Comment User Quibilah
Date 02-Sep-2008
Comments Peace and blessings sis...your words are heart felt...great piece

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